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Warren Buffett's guide to writing in plain English

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One of the world's most famous and successful investors – Warren Buffett, prefers to write in plain English.

 

He wrote the preface in the Plain English Handbook, published by the US Securities and Exchange Commission – which gives some useful advice:

 

“Write with a specific person in mind."

"When writing Berkshire Hathaway’s annual report, I pretend that I’m talking to my sisters.
I have no trouble picturing them: though highly intelligent, they are not experts in accounting or finance. They will understand plain English, but jargon may puzzle them."

"My goal is simply to give them the information I would wish them to supply me if our positions were reversed. To succeed, I don’t need to be Shakespeare; I must, though, have a sincere desire to inform.”
– Warren Buffett

 

Here, he captures the essence of writing in plain language, making four key points:

 

  • Keep your reader in mind
  • Use clear, simple language
  • Avoid technical jargon and gobbledygook
  • Write to inform not to impress

 

If writing plainly is good enough for Mr Buffett, it’s good enough for anyone. Here's how he does it:

 

How to write like Warren Buffett

 

1. Keep it personal – use 'you, we, us and I'. People respond more positively when addressed personally.

 

2. Use short sentences and short paragraphs – aim for an average of 15-20 words per sentence. Make only one point per sentence. Break long sentences into 2-3 short ones.

 

3. Aim to be understood – what you write must be clear on first reading.

 

4. Use the active voice – it's more vigorous and direct. It's also easier to read and understand: 

 

         – use ‘consider’ not ‘consideration’

 

         – ‘appoint’ instead of ‘appointment’

 

         – ‘notify’ rather than ‘notification’

 

 

 

5. Be economical with words – use only as many words as you need:

 

         – use ‘A new bank account is being set up’ instead of  'A new bank account is in the        process of being set up’

 

         – ‘now’ rather than ‘at this present time’

 

         – ‘for’ not ‘on behalf of’

 

6. Use everyday words and expressions – inflated words add little value; buzzwords even less. Stick to words you use in everyday conversation.

 

7. Get to the point – remember your readers don't have much time. Be straightforward. Free yourself of corporate mumbo-jumbo.

Last modified on Monday, 28 January 2013 09:56
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